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final moments
Contributed by
xXxmegsxXx
on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 11:20:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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why am i still living?
why am i still here?
every day the sadness brings
to my eye a tear
pain is all around
there's only one escape
it's the only way
to be rid of hurt and hate
as the blood flows down my arm
i know that it wont last
as in just a few minutes
feelings will be of the past
now it is my time
to fall into eternal sleep
come to me Angel of Death
i give you my soul to reep
Copyright ©
xXxmegsxXx
... [
2005-09-19 11:20:50]
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Re: final moments
(User Rating: 1 )
by JenJen on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 12:37:13 PM AEST
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i feel so sry for you bout feeling this way
my poor baby is going to kill herself (thank god) lol only jkin u no i luv ya reli :D:D
jenni
xxxx
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Re: final moments
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by emphaticplacebo on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 08:07:06 AM AEST
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Nice write. I can certainly relate to the content. Quite sad and subtle, but very effective in getting your ideas aross.
Good job and keep it up, I'll be looking out for your work
Dan |
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Re: final moments
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by my_dark_paradise on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 12:33:19 AM AEST
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| this is good i like how it flows and everything...it's just really true to the real thing. peace out. |
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