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She
Contributed by
paris
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Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 10:58:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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She came into my life one day
and stopped my world from being grey
Before She came, my heart was dead
and now I've left so much unsaid
I've seen her laugh
I've seen her cry
Her beauty captivates my eye
Across the miles
Across the years
I want to wipe away her fears
Kiss her soft
Hold her tight
Watch her sleep all though the night
But theres another in her heart
So I just smile and play my part
She does deserve a better man
But he won't love her like I can
I know one day She will be gone
And I will have to carry on
But grey skies will not bother me
I'll just look back and think of She
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2005-09-19 10:58:35]
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Re: She
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by Winterland on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 12:01:44 PM AEST
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A very beautiful and sad poem! Thank you for sharing.
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Re: She
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 12:26:05 PM AEST
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o how beautiul that is!! what an amazing flow it has to it! well done
megs
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Re: She
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 01:04:19 PM AEST
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Beautifully written portraying unrequited love. Thank you for sharing your feelings with us.
Smiles,
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Re: She
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by Paris on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 09:00:29 AM AEST
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Thanx for input..i'm glad you liked it
Its the first poem I've ever written |
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