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Sorry
Contributed by
kcampbell
on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 10:36:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Sorry.
Sorry I am not your picture of perfection.
Look, I'm sorry.
I didn't mean to hurt you.
Forgive me.
I didn't mean it.
I'm sorry.
I'm sorry I'm not your picture of perfection.
I'm sorry.
I'm sorry I'm not perfect.
I'm sorry I am me.
I'm sorry I am a part
Of this thing they call humanity.
Forgive me.
I'm sorry for all I've done.
I didn't want to hurt you
But all I could do was run.
I'm sorry that I did this.
I'm sorry I let go.
I'm sorry if you're sad.
I'm sorry you didn't know.
Look, it wasn't you
It was entirely me
I am too weak to deal with this
I just wanted to be free
Looking back I didn't understand
Now I have lost that chance
Look, I'm sorry
Can you forgive me
I just couldn't take it anymore.
I'm sorry for all the things I've done
I'm sorry I'm alive
I'm sorry for everything I did
And all the things I've tried
I'm sorry that I died.
I'm sorry.
Copyright ©
kcampbell
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2005-09-19 10:36:28]
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Re: Sorry
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by WAE on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 11:23:44 AM AEST
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Hello there,
A nice one. Very emotional and sounds as a confession. However, I would suggest to review it again and try to avoid the repitition in the first part of it because it doesn'r reinforce the emotions.
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Re: Sorry
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by suicidal_imbecile on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 02:21:56 PM AEST
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to me this poem sounded like a suicide poem, at the end you died, all those thoughts are what your thinking up until the moment, moment of death. maybe that is not what you were thinking but that is the interpretation i got out of the poem. thanks i liked it
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Re: Sorry
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by loving_poet3088 on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 01:01:09 PM AEST
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| I like this poem mainly because it's like your words make me feel your pain. |
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Re: Sorry
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by inoc on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 05:44:31 AM AEST
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I'm sure you are forgiven. Because I have read that you are a christian I know that God has forgotten it and you now can start over
A real life poem so humble
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