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The Quest
Contributed by
anitajames
on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 10:16:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Looking under rainbows
for tiny pots of gold.
Searching for absolution
in heaven's silken fold.
Peering through milky panes of glass
at glistening chandeliers.
Lifting lids off steaming pots
extracting salt from tears.
Entrances to life are slick with fear.
Wanting to be held,
but don't come near.
No stone unturned,
but still I find.
I don't know what is missing..........
Copyright ©
anitajames
... [
2005-09-19 10:16:35]
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Re: The Quest
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by Caged Soul on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 11:22:48 AM AEST
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You have every reason to like this one. Its slick, without being slopy, to the point, without being blunt. I liked the way the words just flow as I read through the poem.
Love the way your soul flows
~souLBro~ |
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Re: The Quest
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by Archie on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 12:23:42 PM AEST
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| This is very good. This poem is very much like a limerick. It rhymes well and brings a smile atleast to this readers face. |
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Re: The Quest
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 03:05:07 PM AEST
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I adore that first stanza. I think that is stunning.
I adore all of the images here.
The end stanza is something I can relate to, especially the last three lines.
I really like this.
Good write,
*hugs*
Phil |
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Re: The Quest
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 07:21:57 AM AEST
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The rhyming is done really well. You really flowed in this one.
Well done.
Take care.
David |
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Re: The Quest
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by secretwind on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 09:59:04 PM AEST
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| EXCELLENT |
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