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Revamp me alive
Contributed by
toserious2
on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 08:07:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Touch my soul and rip it to shreds
While chord of my songs jumble up
And a light blow of eastern wind,
Makes me lost in my rind.
I love you too hard!!!!
A logical path with philosophical thought,
A knotted love with soul distraught
A thirsty sea stirred in heart
Like a candle in intense dark,
Ah, renovate my deserted path.
I am sad in my wrath,
Not know why I am so,
Perhaps an infidel is dead,
Or some lover’s sighs have gone dried,
O’ exact my rusty breast.
Compose me in shovel of lust
Like renaissance of ball’s bard
Assemble me in shawl of hope,
Revive me as saint’s trance;
I am eager to die in your arms.
Copyright ©
toserious2
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2005-09-19 08:07:26]
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Re: Revamp me alive
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 03:53:46 AM AEST
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beautiful, your heart is on the page indeed.
Im slapping myself for missing these.
Michelle |
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Re: Revamp me alive
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by Clarity_Rising on
Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 12:28:17 AM AEST
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| Beautiful... I can feel the emotion coming from this poem with out it being overbearing. |
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