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DON'T EVER MESS WITH ME, GIRL!
Contributed by
robertdavidson
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Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 05:43:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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DON'T EVER MESS WITH ME GIRL!
by Robert Davidson.
Don't wanna hit no all-time low
Don't wanna be no broken-hearted clown;
Never want no lowdown fickle woman
A-turnin' my life upside down.
So, if you ain't got nothin' to give, baby
No genuine heart to unfurl;
Then don't ever mess with me, girl
Don't ever mess with me.
Don't wanna no girl lead me on
Don't wanna lovin' leavin' me confused;
Never wanna feel I've been played upon
A-feelin' I've been badly used.
So you wanna make it good with me, baby
You wanna try give it a whirl;
Then don't ever mess with me, girl
Don't ever mess with me.
I've been badly torn apart once before.
Had me a liitle girl many years ago,
Who said she'd love me forever more.
Well, she stole my heart, then slept around
With every other guy in town.
Don't wanna be no lonely heart
Don't wanna have no nothin' come my way;
Never want no girl messin' with my life.
'Cause there's a price she'll have to pay.
So don't ever push my love aside. baby,
Or try a-giving it the hurl.
So, don't ever mess with me, girl
Don't ever mess with me.
Copyright ©
robertdavidson
... [
2005-09-19 05:43:42] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: DON'T EVER MESS WITH ME, GIRL!
(User Rating: 1 ) by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 06:52:50 PM AEST (User
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VERY RAW AND DIRECT---- I LOVE THE WAY YOU PHRASED THIS POEM// |
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Re: DON'T EVER MESS WITH ME, GIRL!
(User Rating: 1 ) by death_not_be_feared on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 08:02:18 PM AEST (User
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very cold and sexist but overall a decent write not all girls are out there to give u something and if thats not what you're tlking about pm me and explain to me what it does |
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Re: DON'T EVER MESS WITH ME, GIRL!
(User Rating: 1 ) by candysears on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 08:39:59 PM AEST (User
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Great poem...I think one will think twice before she mess you around...
God Bless! |
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Re: DON'T EVER MESS WITH ME, GIRL!
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 08:16:37 AM AEST (User
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Very good writing.
i can relate.
huggs,
emy
but I relate visversa |
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