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Epilogue
Contributed by
ShadowDaughter
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Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 12:12:20 AM in AEST
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despite december,
you linger in parallels
laced in [all my] syllables,
I learn to let you stay
and you don't fade and I
forgive you that.
---and then you go the angels sing its
gone so gone for
good---
the permanence
chokes, unsayable
hangs over hangs over
it's all repetition
your echo in my fist you fly
away
we breathe and breathe and
soon enough,
I will.
but december's lost chance
at one more collapse
(and I cannot
forgive you that.)
Copyright ©
ShadowDaughter
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2005-09-19 00:12:20]
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Re: Epilogue
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 03:29:12 AM AEST
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>>> A Nora-Poem! ---and then you go the angels sing its
gone so gone for
good---
- Wonderful work, very strong, and with a trueness about it.
(Ahau!)
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Re: Epilogue
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by AndTheFoolShallBurn on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 11:52:51 AM AEST
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| I love it. |
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Re: Epilogue
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 11:53:12 AM AEST
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Hmmm a goodbye, but perhaps not really an ending.
Letting go is not always an easy thing, so true of love and anger.
This is deeply felt. |
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Re: Epilogue
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 03:30:58 PM AEST
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Nora, you posted! :D
This reminds me of someone. This seems very real, Norry. Like you have shown a part of yourself here, right on the screen. I know how hard that is to do.
I like this.
It's nice to see you writing again hun,
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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Re: Epilogue
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 01:57:53 PM AEST
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| This is good. I found myself thinking about why I am on this site and your name came to mind. I think this is one of those thinking poems that only the writer can truly understand. |
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Re: Epilogue
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by Dri on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 03:10:15 PM AEST
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| this lacks a little of the depth of your poems tend to have... good, though. i'm such a fan. |
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Re: Epilogue
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by SunflowersAndTea on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 01:03:10 AM AEST
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| this is one breathtaking poem. i love it all....i love how it lingers in my mind, and i love the way it reads, everything... i love how it seems so abstract, but at the same time it is very concise and descriptive....good job. |
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Re: Epilogue
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by Cancer on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 12:34:11 AM AEST
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a scrapbook of verbal wounds. beauty.
"despite december,
you linger in parallels"
for some reason, that sparked strange and seemingly unrelated images inside me. the rest of the scrawl followed suit. probably why i like it.
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Re: Epilogue
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 04:38:54 PM AEST
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It flows like an erratic heartbeat, but a heartbeat nonetheless. Beautiful in its spontaneity.
Take care,
David |
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Re: Epilogue
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by outlawpoet on
Friday, 17th October 2008 @ 04:58:07 PM AEST
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| this is a good poem great choic of words here great rythm |
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