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Haved you ever?
Contributed by
jjones12
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Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 08:50:32 PM in AEST
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have you ever liked someone so much when you see them you get butterflys in you stumach and you get the chills?
have you ever liked someone so much but instead of realing on you he relied on pills,
have you ever wanted them to no,
have you ever seen them go,
have you ever almost loved someone with all your heart,
have you ever been this far apart
have you ever wished that you would of spoke up,
before his last cut?
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Re: Haved you ever?
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by coolbreeze17 on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 12:06:02 AM AEST
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| interesting ...but can relate... |
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Re: Haved you ever?
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by remote on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 09:09:19 AM AEST
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butterflys in you stumach = butterflies in your stomach?
wanted them to no = wanted them to know?
been this far apart = doesn't say what 'this' stand for
would of spoke up = should have spoken up?
May be you can ask mods to edit it for you.
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