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His Confession
Contributed by
punkwthn
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Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 08:37:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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One drunken night revealed so many secrets behind his mask of "happiness."
Out came the most powerful confession she'd ever heard.
He repeated the phrase "I love you" so many times, she dared not utter a word.
Her tears fell silently behind her eyelashes and he began to cry as well.
Somehow they ended up entangled, worlds spinning, on the floor.
She offered words of comfort and asked him to explain more.
A lifetime of covering the truth in lie-colored wrapping paper.
A secret so intense, it led his life to drugs and sorrow.
Even tried to take his own life, now glad he lived to see tomorrow.
She soaks up all of the truth, a sponge to his confession.
He begs for her forgiveness, and she tells him it will all be okay.
They hold each other on the floor and cry until the next day.
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punkwthn
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2005-09-18 20:37:53]
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Re: His Confession
(User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 09:18:51 PM AEST
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| This is more than what I expected. This is an awesome and honest hearted poem. |
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Re: His Confession
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 03:19:45 AM AEST
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A piece of very vivid and very powerful emotion, I can't help but be moved.
Well done!
Andrew |
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