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I am darkness
Contributed by
pam
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Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 07:02:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Tricked sometimes so badly
to think the night was deadly
the night sheds a tear
onto the frozen ground
and now hurt is cast aside by flames
I have offered you this blaze
to show that light claims as many lives in my world
and now tragedy takes its toll
amongst every single last soul
the innocent saved only for their graves
and now time is lost
the fire's forgotten
we are now the frost
as time proves us to be forgotten
Copyright ©
pam
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2005-09-18 19:02:18]
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Re: I am darkness
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by Archie on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 09:10:01 PM AEST
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| Nice poem. I am not exactly sure what you mean. but the words seem to go together well. |
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Re: I am darkness
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 09:29:22 PM AEST
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I like the way this flows
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