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Love
Contributed by
jambo
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Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 04:06:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Ever since I saw your eyes, I knew my heart would find eternal peace.
With you, my hunger for your love, my thirst for your trust, would be calmed.
After out first, unforgettable encounter, I could feel it in my jealous, racing heart that your soul could calm me , and with your love, I can find eternal joy and happiness.
Your persona fills me with glee and delight and this itself, blossomed my love for you.
I so hope you feel the same.
After my cold, gloom of rejection in the past, my longing wish is to find that someone to share my love, warmth and care.
That someone who has my most affection and has captured my wondering, lonely soul. That someone is you.
I can't say how much I’m sorry if this is not what you want but my cold heart is breaking and aching to be honest. Forgive me my weakness. I need you by me, my heart with your heart, our souls entwined. My love for you is uncontrollably growing whenever i think of you. Your soft, passive hair, your polished smile, your eyes like gleaming pools of calmness, your rose, bless lips. These are only the magnificent veils that cover your stunning, supernatural essence.
I'm so filled with love for you,
I'm so filled with dreams for you,
I want you, you and your love.
I love you.
Copyright ©
jambo
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2005-09-18 16:06:29]
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Re: Love
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 04:21:45 PM AEST
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| Good poem. |
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Re: Love
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by Archie on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 04:27:38 PM AEST
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| You did a good job on this. When you are writing from your heart it is okay to not be perfect in the world's eyes. Even when you write the perfect poem some will disagree. |
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Re: Love
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by brew on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 07:31:06 PM AEST
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Heart felt write here..............thats all you can do.......hope they get it.! Liked it alot.
Brew~ |
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Re: Love
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 11:36:59 PM AEST
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A very powerful dedication of love. Who could turn that down? Blessings.
Rita |
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