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Power of our words?
Contributed by
remote
on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 01:14:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A good Doctor Masaru Emoto
experiments on water.
Filled up some bottles;
Labelled each
love, hate, compassion,
terror and greed.
To one called 'love',
he spoke of love
to one called 'hate',
he spoke with hate.
Thus with greed,
compassion and terror.
Freezing the water
looking through the scanner.
The crystals of love
shone bright as diamonds
Like a lotus were shining
the crystals of compassion.
Those that were called
hate, greed and terror
seemed all misshapen,
fearsome broken and lost.
Could this really be
the power of our words?
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remote
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2005-09-18 13:14:03]
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Re: Power of our words?
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 07:17:18 PM AEST
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Our spoken words can make or break another. Children can blossom or die from hearing words spoken between their parents. Professors and teachers can make or break a budding genius with words of encouragement or negativity. This is quite an interesting piece of work. Thank you for sharing.
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Re: Power of our words?
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 03:02:20 AM AEST
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Interesting, interesting!
Well written too. Nicely done!
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Re: Power of our words?
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by Caged Soul on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 07:30:08 AM AEST
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This is a well written, real and thought provoking piece. I like the almost narative way in which it was written which gives it a feeling of "fantasy realism". I appretiate what the poem is trying to convey to the reader, reminding them just how powerfull words can be.
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Re: Power of our words?
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 09:28:46 AM AEST
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| This is well written the power of words can impact the heart. I hope we all can take this to heart. |
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