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take it
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 12:42:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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pray
play
and wait.
having expectation
is of our faith,
save.
Copyright ©
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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2005-09-18 12:42:29]
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Re: take it
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by lostrelic on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 12:57:03 PM AEST
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short but sweet but wait? ok i am to much in faith i cant wait
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Re: take it
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 03:01:02 AM AEST
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Rather good, this. I like it, but I feel that last word breaks the flow somehow. Do I understand it correctly as an imperative, like the first words? Perhaps a hyphen would be better than a comma to separate lines 4 and 5 from 6.
I agree, by the way, and find this very well stated and meaningful.
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Re: take it
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by Kimmie_mac on
Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 01:07:39 AM AEST
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| I like it short and to the point. Alot of meaning hidden in such few words. I iike your work. Kim |
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