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YOUR EYES
Contributed by
jackee_line
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Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 10:50:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I found a dream in your eyes.
A mere glance
into the depth of your soul.
Mesmerized
by the energy it cast apon my heart.
The gleam fortelling the many moments
yet to come.
The specks of hope
shimmering,
dancing,
teasing my mind with vivid pictures
that i imagine with just a glance
of this dream
within your eyes.
~*~
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Re: YOUR EYES
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by brew on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 12:25:33 PM AEST
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Very endearing......yes, .....Eyes, the window to ones soul......they can tell all.! Liked it alot
Brew~ |
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Re: YOUR EYES
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 02:54:45 AM AEST
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Beautiful work. The wording is simple but vivid, and the pictures pleasing and inspiring. Nicely done!
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Re: YOUR EYES
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 07:07:52 PM AEST
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An inspiring, beautiful and very well written piece of poetry. Thanks so much for sharing your beautiful work with us.
*hugs*
sue |
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Re: YOUR EYES
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by outlaw_mutiny on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 06:57:52 PM AEST
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nice write i enjoyed it
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Re: YOUR EYES
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 02:36:51 PM AEST
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First and foremost this is an enjoyable read, secondly can I run the risk of offending you by telling an eye joke?... that prolly the whole world and his dogs heard before...
What do you call a blind stag?
No Idea (get it no eyed deer!) O.K I'm getting my coat...
J |
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Re: YOUR EYES
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by emystar on
Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 04:15:53 AM AEST
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Very beautifull write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: YOUR EYES
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 10:30:01 AM AEST
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Well done. I very moving piece which is short yet so very sweet.
BRAVO!
- SCM |
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Re: YOUR EYES
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 08:27:42 AM AEST
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so very lovely
NS |
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Re: YOUR EYES
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 02:43:18 AM AEST
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Wonderful poem, with glowing, dreamy;-) words.
Very beautiful.
Hugs,
Hur |
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Re: YOUR EYES
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 10:32:44 PM AEST
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This is beautiful and ain't that what love should be? yes absolutely enchanting a
write posessing the innocence and warmth
of all that love is about. Splendid my friend.
Ben |
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Re: YOUR EYES
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by grin69 on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 02:26:45 AM AEST
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| Wow, this is awesome. I think I can learn a thing or two from reading your poems. I see that you're popular too! Definitely gonna keep reading your stuff!! Have a good one! |
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Re: YOUR EYES
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by Sinned on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 07:34:49 AM AEST
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Jackee_Line
Mesmerised. I am by your poem
short and sweet.
Filled with loving meaning.
Thanks for this entery I enjoyed very much.
Sinned---now on to another poet to comment. : ) |
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Re: YOUR EYES
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 09:01:52 AM AEST
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| Aww to know that feeling is so wonderful i know exactly how you feel for I have somebody who makes me feel the same way. Excellent write. Enjoyed reading |
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Re: YOUR EYES
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by DarkFaerie on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 08:39:12 PM AEST
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| amazing write. I could feel your emotion and desire. |
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Re: YOUR EYES
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 09:38:31 AM AEST
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aah the windows of the soul... whoever first said that was bang on the money.
Beautiful and dreamy very well done indeed.
J
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Re: YOUR EYES
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 10:50:23 PM AEST
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very emotive..and well written-
they should be most proud.. and flattered too-
5-
Billy |
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Re: YOUR EYES
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by stew777 on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 09:29:09 AM AEST
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Words From The Hear are always special.
This is a great read beutiful poetry. extra special.
Thanks for sharing your work. |
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Re: YOUR EYES
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 12:29:38 AM AEST
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Beautiful and very telling..
seemingly composed with emotion
and not intelect-
..from the heart, as it were.
Sincerely-
B |
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Re: YOUR EYES
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by TheStoryTeller on
Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 05:31:55 AM AEST
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| Wonderful.. Wonderful.. Wonderful.. What a lovely write |
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Re: YOUR EYES
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by AdamChantell on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 11:41:57 AM AEST
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| a very sweet write. |
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