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The Rock Of Ages

Contributed by gwenevere on Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 08:20:10 AM in AEST
Topic: fictional



Blackened waters, mists of time, surround the rock of age
Slate of many centuries, battered by sea's rage
Castle stands upon the rock, ruins cold and stark
Whispered voices of the past, creeping from the dark

Sunlight , she comes creeping from the skies so grey
Challenging the eerie air, welcoming the day
Bathe's the rock in sunlight, gives a welcome glow
Promise of her magic, to the rock below

New age is now dawning, wakened from it's sleep
Murmering of spirits, from the waters deep
Castle of all yesterday's, waiting battle torn
Listening in silence, for the brand new dawn




Copyright © gwenevere ... [ 2005-09-18 08:20:10]
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Re: The Rock Of Ages (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 08:28:42 AM AEST
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This is good. You have encompassed history and heart in this poem. I like it.


Re: The Rock Of Ages (User Rating: 1 )
by remote on Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 10:50:40 AM AEST
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Very enjoyable, scary at first uplifting in the end.


Re: The Rock Of Ages (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 12:55:14 PM AEST
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very interesting write love the new age is now dawning that is such a true verse of the years ahead

r.m.wilder


Re: The Rock Of Ages (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 02:18:07 AM AEST
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Well done! You picked your words very well, and the resultant picture is a pleasing one. Keep it up.

Andrew


Re: The Rock Of Ages (User Rating: 1 )
by kcampbell on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 11:02:11 AM AEST
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I really like this poem, you are a talented writer, keep it up!




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