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summer's gone
Contributed by
xXxmegsxXx
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Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 05:36:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
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autumn's coming
that's the wind's whisper
leaves are browning
getting much crisper
summer's gone
it past me by
now the sun hangs low
in the darkening sky
as sunshine goes
replaced by darkness
my joy goes with it
so now there's just sadness
clouds now fill
the once blue skies
and so to my happiness
i say my good-byes
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xXxmegsxXx
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2005-09-18 05:36:52]
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Re: summer's gone
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by Spike on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 08:07:17 AM AEST
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Poor old Autumn - such a bum rap as a season of death. I prefer a sentiment of change, of shedding the old in anticipation of the new. Now, my little introspection aside, I loved the opening lines to this one, and enjoyed the flow and feelings imbuing this piece.
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Re: summer's gone
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 02:13:58 AM AEST
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This has excellent flow and feeling. I too love Autumn, but I can understand the feelings expressed herein.
Well done.
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