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Promise
Contributed by
cleoaurora
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Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 02:44:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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The day you told me lie and said goodbye
I looked once at your eyes and I found
There was a little hesitation of
Having me as your best friend
It's your decision but I want you to know
Because I care about you
If you want to go back
when you need somebody beside you
I'm here,
if everyone else doesn't
I'll stay
Here you still have me
Let the scream swallowed down into the earth
And the tears of sadness you cry will also fall
With the raindrops straight to the ground
Look at me, please smile
I promise you a nice unbreakable day
Where the sun brightly shines
And the entire world's telling you:
You still have me
As you might fall, you need to know,
I'll catch you when you do
I'll grab your hands and repeat my promise:
"Now and forever, you still have me."
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cleoaurora
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2005-09-18 02:44:51]
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Re: Promise
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 03:32:47 AM AEST
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Sweet write.
Welcome, and I look forward to reading more of your work. |
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Re: Promise
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 07:37:08 AM AEST
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| thats such a sweet poem, the person in it is lucky to have u as a friend |
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Re: Promise
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by Sahara on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 08:42:32 AM AEST
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Excellent write, very sweet. Beautiful, I agree your friend is very lucky to have you.
Sonya |
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Re: Promise
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by slogan on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 09:03:26 AM AEST
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| great write....jh |
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