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Emergency Room
Contributed by
Writting_Fever
on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 11:26:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I didn't believe,
It was you in that van,
I was only watching the football game,
As your biggest fan,
When the lights turned their colors,
And the sirens filled the crowed,
I wanted to block everything out,
The screams and lights were too loud,
You looked so helpless,
And I couldn't do a thing,
I watched them take you away,
Then faded the siren's ring,
I followed you there,
All the way to your bed,
I held your weak hand,
The other graced your hurting head,
The x-rays took forever,
I thought you'd never come out,
The news was a concusion,
It ended my deepest doubt,
I wanted you,
To lay right by your side,
I wanted to be in your place,
So you wouldn't experiance the ride,
As soon as you could talk,
Or knew my true full name,
I broke down into tears,
And cried without any shame,
If I had the choice,
To stay right with you that night,
I would've stayed forever,
To make sure you were alright,
I'm so gald you're alright,
I needed you to be,
'Cause I was lost without you,
As everyone could see.
Copyright ©
Writting_Fever
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2005-09-17 23:26:04]
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Re: Emergency Room
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by lostrelic on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 11:33:32 PM AEST
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| a very touching and beautful write thanks for the experience |
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Re: Emergency Room
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by BigDaddy on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 11:34:11 PM AEST
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I am glad your boyfriend will be alright!
An event like this kind of puts things in perspective. You had detailed thoughts and visuals of this accident that you conveyed very well in your poem. This was a bad experience, but I tell you it will make you stronger and more appreciative of life and the time we have on this Earth. Thanks |
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Re: Emergency Room
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by twisted_dreams on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 04:16:56 PM AEST
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wow... that is soo good.. that night i felt so bad for you becuase you could just see it your eyes how worried u were.. and i was so glad when i heard it was just a conusion! i'm sure mitch was so thankful to have u there with him! Great write!
LYLAS
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Re: Emergency Room
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by shaydie_lady on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 03:46:26 PM AEST
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Sorry i didnt write sooner,
this is a realy cool poem |
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