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PROMISE OF A NEW DAY
Contributed by
darkkai
on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 02:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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During the hour of dusk
the sky changes slowly,
Something To Remember
White Doves fly free of danger
Quiet scenes of the cemetary
bring comfort to this old soul.
Thinking of past failures,
the first star shining bright.
I stopped, I realize.
I'm wishin' on someone else's star.
I turn and gaze at the sun decendin'
My bad day is endin'
Finishing my duties
I pack and leave.
Knowing what i know now,
I wish of a love I lost.
Confusing as it my be,
I still wished for a promise
I keep in my heart.......
The Crossroads
Copyright ©
darkkai
... [
2003-01-17 14:00:00]
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Re: PROMISE OF A NEW DAY
(User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 05:50:50 PM AEST
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| I truly liked this peice,I use to clean houses huge ones! Thats why I was compelled to read this good one! Christina |
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Re: PROMISE OF A NEW DAY
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by OreO on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 11:40:08 PM AEST
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O' this is beautiful...my friend you do realize you have style in your writings i hope.....they take me to places i haven't been ....and your poems are always definately worth reading...love this one...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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