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Heal
Contributed by
JHONEN32629
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Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 08:19:40 PM in AEST
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Heal these wounds that you cut deep inside of you.
Heal the sorrow that you are living.
Get out of the pit that holds depression, and heal.
Just cure the pain, you'll be alright. Jst cure the pain, you'll be alright. Don't let the darkness below overpower you.
All you need is the moonlight to shine down on all of your mistakes, so you can erase them, erase them.
Heal these wounds that you cut deep inside of you.
Heal this sorrow that you are living.
Get out of the pit that holds depression, and heal.
Close your eyes and remake your own life.
Don't make yourself a regret, don't make your life a regret, just heal.
Just heal the wounds that you cut deep inside of you.
Heal the sorrow you are living.
Get out of the pit that holds depression, and heal, heal.
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Re: Heal
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by Archie on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 09:01:42 PM AEST
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| Great write. You make something hard seem simple. Life is not always that way. |
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Re: Heal
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 10:57:14 PM AEST
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Nicely done...good advice too. Hope others read it and take note.
Welcome to YPDC....looking forward to more from you...
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Re: Heal
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 01:43:12 PM AEST
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depression...it's difficult to get out of, and you make it sound easy in this poem...i dunno if that's good or not, but i like it. it's easier to heal when you have to will to heal
great write
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