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A Good Man
Contributed by
anitajames
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Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 07:57:14 PM in AEST
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A good man is so hard to find:
Even when you're ugly
and you're teeth are bared.
He never makes you sorry
for the love that you've shared.
His tears, when you hurt him
are real and not played.
He keeps his commitments
and hates his mistakes.
He holds your heart in his chest with his own.
His love is more prescious than any cold stone.
Thank you God, for making him mine.
He gave back my smile,
and takes the gray from my eyes.
Copyright ©
anitajames
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2005-09-17 19:57:14]
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Re: A Good Man
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by JHONEN32629 on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 08:30:12 PM AEST
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That was a good poem, it was touching, but I like girls of course, lol.
Good job! And i'm glad that you found the guy for you! |
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Re: A Good Man
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by LostAmbition on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 09:58:07 PM AEST
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hey I'm a good guy and no one wants me! hah.
Good poem, good for you two! |
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Re: A Good Man
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 10:22:24 PM AEST
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Do you think we could possible clone him so a few more of us might be happy? : ))
This is a cute poem and I do wish there were more men in the world like you have. Blessings to you both.
Rita |
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Re: A Good Man
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 03:41:41 AM AEST
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| Aww! Sweet write. |
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Re: A Good Man
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by coolbreeze17 on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 11:54:29 PM AEST
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| love it love it love it!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: A Good Man
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 07:05:38 AM AEST
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Yes, hard to find. Very hard to be, too. Still, if they're this well accepted, I might just keep on trying.
Well done, and take care.
David |
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