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untitled
Contributed by
loura
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Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 07:06:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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and love becomes hate,
and hate becomes blood
light becomes darkness,
and my soul is finally free.
She became a black star in a summer night
when like an angel she fell from the sun
and forever she will remain in my dreams
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Re: untitled
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 03:59:37 PM AEST
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Nice words.....would have been better if expanded on some more...
Welcome to YPDC...hope you enjoy it here...
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Re: untitled
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by remote on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 01:01:54 PM AEST
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| very nice, liked the way it flowed, starting from hate killing her and her becoming a black star. Loved the way life is represented as light and sun, and death as darkness and black star. And it was all in your dreams. |
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