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Repetetive Pain
Contributed by
bobotheclown
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Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 01:20:00 PM in AEST
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I don't know why I feel this way
Why its hard to make it to the next day
Why I feel so broken and worthless
Why I don't feel like a person
Why I feel like an invisible wraith
Every day I feel destroyed and trashed
Like I've burned and crashed
Like I've failed, left without a purpose
Like a ball kicked around and abused
Like I'm a target for disrespect, when all I did was respect
When all I can see are the question marks and tears
I think I've stayed here to many years
I think its time to give in and get some peace
I think I can do without all this *****
I think... I'm confused
When the depression wraps me in its cloak
I realize I can't breathe only choke
I realize just how stupid I really am
I realize how pain really feels
I realize when I want to scream and I can't wash myself clean
And I realize how worthless my life really is
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Re: Repetetive Pain
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by AnnD on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 01:39:10 PM AEST
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I know what you are feeling.....but no life is worthless.
From all the bad things and misadventures which cross our paths during our lives......comes the strength to make us what we are and what we will be. No experience is wrong......it just gives us another aspect of life to draw experience from.
I hope all is well with you....you have pennes this well.
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Re: Repetetive Pain
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by sidra on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 02:48:39 PM AEST
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| I feel like this everyday . I know the feeling no matter what i do it still is the same.. |
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Re: Repetetive Pain
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by wyrd_faerie on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 04:36:14 PM AEST
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| this is so sad...joel...you're not worthless, i promise, you of all people, you're not worthless... |
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Re: Repetetive Pain
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by mckayla on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 08:34:32 PM AEST
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I feel like that sometimes too. Well I hope you dont feel like that all the time!!
mckayla |
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Re: Repetetive Pain
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by OreO on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 11:35:54 PM AEST
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Joel my friend...worthless?....now..we me an you both know better than this now...who is the one who takes up for me for no reason? who is the one who always has a kind word to say? who is the one that never fails to say hello or hi....you have touched the lives of so many people and i know it doesnt feel like it but you have my friend....and your very special to me...so you get your chin up...and if need to talk you know where i am......your poetry is always deep and touch my soul Joel...keep writing your feelings out....and who you are....
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Re: Repetetive Pain
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 04:59:14 PM AEST
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you are not worthless your words speak of a pain very many feel... and to those who don't it gives them an idea...how it is for the rest.
I believe in your words and you.
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Re: Repetetive Pain
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by frozensuicide on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 09:21:31 PM AEST
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| your not worthless buddy! this was good, and the rhyming, i liked. |
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Re: Repetetive Pain
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by merge on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 02:00:53 AM AEST
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| I can relate to how you feel. I enjoyed your use of a cloak and being trapped. I do agree that pain is a cloak and I think this was a great choice as a symbol. |
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