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Abre Tu OjosTouch The Earth
Contributed by
darkkai
on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 01:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Deep in the sea of darkness,
I bring the heart that bled pain.
Your graceland shows the rainbow.
Follow'd your feet in the sand.
See the Black Rose burn,
alluring & mindblowing,
like the summer day, feel the heat again.
Graceful & unbound by chains,
Clinging our hearts is desire,
Can You Freeze The Flame of Love???
Bleed in the fashion of deadly angels.
Scream to the bleeding shallow grave
Now open your eyes,
Fall from the Vanilla Sky.
Copyright ©
darkkai
... [
2003-01-17 13:00:00]
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Re: Abre Tu OjosTouch The Earth
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by ladymae3 on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 04:17:36 PM AEST
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I couldnt feel anything from ur poem, I especially didnt like the end:
Now open your eyes,
Fall from the Vanilla Sky. |
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Re: Abre Tu OjosTouch The Earth
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by OreO on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 11:20:01 PM AEST
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Hmm...yes i want the other version.....email it to me....i'd love to read it......*smiles*...love this...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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