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Footprint In The Sand
Contributed by
gwenevere
on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 10:52:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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My bare feet walk along the sand, my footprints left behind
I smell the soft and salty air and wander in my mind
A rock I see to sit upon, a seat within a stone
There is but myself here today, but I am not alone
The gentle waters kiss my feet, and once again recede
I feel a sweet contentment that fills an aching need
I close my eyes and picture you, it seems so long ago
But I can hear your gentle voice, within the tidal flow
If ever I am lonely and need to feel you near
I return again to find you, I know you're waiting here
Close my eyes and feel you caress and kiss my hand
I look down and see two pairs of footprints in the sand
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gwenevere
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2005-09-17 10:52:29]
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Re: Footprint In The Sand
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by Archie on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 11:22:35 AM AEST
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| This reminds me of that poem, you know the one. This seems to have a different meaning though, yet it is pleasant to read. |
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Re: Footprint In The Sand
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 01:24:27 PM AEST
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I absolutely love this. My heart skipped a beat as I felt the water at my feet and the smell of the ocean air.
Lovely write.
*hugs*
Shannon |
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Re: Footprint In The Sand
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 04:20:00 PM AEST
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A peacful and lovely write like that ending swept me away, very beautiful Ros . . .
Ben |
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Re: Footprint In The Sand
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 05:42:32 PM AEST
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Oh, this was so beautiful. I really loved it! So peaceful. So tranquil.
So calmingly comforting. Wonderful write!
~Breezy |
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Re: Footprint In The Sand
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by brew on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 08:28:54 PM AEST
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What a wonderful feeling I got when reading..gave you clones....and by the sea, is a calming place to begin with.! yes, to have 2 sets of foot prints..............just calmness.
Brew~ |
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Re: Footprint In The Sand
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by Spike on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 07:58:33 AM AEST
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A sweet write about a place of connection. Interesting choice, as the beach face is physically a place of convergence of many forces.
Spike |
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Re: Footprint In The Sand
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 09:47:41 PM AEST
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| I'm speechless...this so sweet |
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Re: Footprint In The Sand
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by kcampbell on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 10:46:45 AM AEST
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| I really really like this poem. It is awesome. I like footprints, they are cool. Actually, I just painted tiny ones on my wall last night. |
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Re: Footprint In The Sand
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by daprdan on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 09:23:45 PM AEST
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This is very good (but you already knew that... )
Does the OTHER person know of it?
This is my favorite place to reflect as well, many memories and many pangs as well... |
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