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Reflections
Contributed by
freak98976
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Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 04:51:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
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When I look into a mirror reflections are all I see
Then I think to myself no that cannot be me
But then I look at all the sides and parts
And all those different reflections have many different hearts
Those many hearts are not complete indeed way too uneven
One catches my eye she thinks she will go to heaven
Then another one is depressing sad as can be
All she wants is for everyone to see
This other one wishes to flee she cowers in the dark night
She is antisocial living away from light
Then another one silent and quiet always running like dove
She is cold lonely locked up wanting no love
Then out of most there is the heartless one
She can dodge words like bullets from a gun
There is also the gleeful girl pretty in pink
Be careful with water she is just made of ink
But then there is happy she is so hidden
She is truly unhappy she was broken when smitten
But then I see all these reflections combined in the mirror
And I look closer and see a trickle of a gray little tear
I think to myself whipping it away all of these are parts of me
But no I do not want anyone to be able to see
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Re: Reflections
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 04:58:08 AM AEST
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| Wow...this is indeed a very emotional write. It's very well-written. I look forward to reading more of your work. |
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Re: Reflections
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 08:26:32 AM AEST
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| Strong feelings put across well. Good write. Christopher. |
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Re: Reflections
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by remote on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 09:43:13 AM AEST
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| Good idea for a poetry. Could have been better if varied personas were potrayed, apart from just happy/unhappy. |
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Re: Reflections
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by kareless on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 03:18:02 PM AEST
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You envisioned this...a concept perhaps, of true emotions and created a vision for us to see; painted a picture for us to read...nothing more can be said for a well written portrayal of your true feelings, and your write falls nothing short.
I liked this very much. Great poem...
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Re: Reflections
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by Channing on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 07:32:12 PM AEST
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| Interesting and emotional, I like it. |
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