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Abyss
Contributed by
Channing
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Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 01:41:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I cannot see in front or behind
I will only see in my mind
There is no sun, no shine
Things creep past my spine
Do I go backward or forward?
The dark doesn’t seem to end
This world is gorged with discord
Fear makes my mind and body bend
I am oblivious to what comes before
That I feel I can take no more
I realize this abyss is made of lies
So I simply open my eyes
Copyright ©
Channing
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2005-09-17 01:41:47]
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Re: Abyss
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by Davinah on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 07:36:18 AM AEST
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Short but sweet...
I really loved this one!!! |
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Re: Abyss
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by psychokiller138 on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 10:43:08 AM AEST
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| very nice!!! |
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Re: Abyss
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by freak98976 on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 03:26:14 PM AEST
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| Great expressions. Like you think all of this is all there is but then you open your eyes to a new type of thing. I enjoyed reading this very much. Please keep writing more I look foward to readding more of your work! |
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