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Tolerate
Contributed by
Pyrofungus
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Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 10:04:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Tolerate what you will
In this infinite land of show and tells.
Let the truth unfold
As the lies open up and bleed their way through your mind,
Hypnotizing it as it screams, and latches onto its precious visions of the past.
But they can’t be real
They can’t show you what you want to see.
As it flows deeper into your heart its swallowing what used to be,
Lifting you onto another mistake
Another regret
Another guilt trip to long to forget.
Copyright ©
Pyrofungus
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2005-09-16 22:04:15]
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Re: Tolerate
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by sarankrish on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 10:26:23 PM AEST
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Re: Tolerate
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by remote on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 09:44:29 AM AEST
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Re: Tolerate
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 01:02:52 AM AEST
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I like the choice of words here. Gracefully put.
I notice a couple instances where 'it' is used, when 'they' should probably be right (assuming both cases are speaking of the lies of line 4).
Keep writing!
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