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Demon
Contributed by
WAE
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Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 03:31:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
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No longer whole,
Even not a man but an empty shadow,
I roam senselessly among the ruins of the world
I used to call My Life.
My spirit's gone;
My will’s reduced to nothing;
My sacred soul has been evaporating
Leaving an aching breach behind.
My stubborn thirst for understanding things
Beyond a mortal is allowed
Is the cause of my damnation,
Which I have to bear until I disappear.
Copyright ©
WAE
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2005-09-16 15:31:25]
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Re: Demon
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by kcampbell on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 03:50:30 PM AEST
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| Don't let it be the last. |
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Re: Demon
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by remote on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 03:54:18 PM AEST
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| You got to continue, this ends in quite a negetive note. |
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Re: Demon
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by freak98976 on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 03:18:16 PM AEST
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| Wow, I love it. Yes it does end in a negative note but doesn't mean it needs to change. Sometimes negative is a good thing. In my opinion negative is nice. I hope though that this isn't the last, you should write more parts. But kudos! |
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Re: Demon
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by LeahBeth on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 05:27:35 PM AEST
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| wonderful! |
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Re: Demon
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 04:45:43 PM AEST
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I agree with you but probably for different reasons.
If there were a way to free yourself would you do it? |
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