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Kicking The Stone
Contributed by
remote
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Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 09:31:21 AM in AEST
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I kick a stone
and see it go
it takes a flight
and hits the ground
it rolls, and
jumps a couple of times
before it lays there still.
I walk up to it
and take a good look;
is it the same, that got hit?
It could be another,
but that doesn't matter.
I kick the stone
and off it goes, again.
(This is one of my old favorites. Hmm, let's see, how many of you drew parallel between us and the stone?)
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Re: Kicking The Stone
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by Rxqueen on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 10:40:09 AM AEST
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| Can'tfind the paralell, but I did enjoy the read. The simplicity is nice, and I would love for you to tell me your analogy... I am not that good at finding the alter meenings... XOXO |
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Re: Kicking The Stone
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by WAE on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 11:23:06 AM AEST
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Hey J.
Very funny... I was not looking for an hiden message for there could be a million of logical and illogical associations but I saw a man with his hands in the pockets, expression of boredom on his face, walking along a dusty road and....
Cheers,
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Re: Kicking The Stone
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by brew on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 12:09:00 PM AEST
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Hm....well kicking a stone, eh? more like kicking out things, that arent needed, yet wanted.?! I dont, know.I am like rxqueen, I hate some anologies........good write tho.
Brew~ |
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Re: Kicking The Stone
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by Archie on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 02:28:56 PM AEST
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| The allusion is that we are the stone and nothing in us changes we just get kicked around. I hope that was not what you were trying to say |
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Re: Kicking The Stone
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by remote on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 02:58:00 PM AEST
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Elaboration. We are like stones with our 'kicks' good/bad, happy/sad etc. Now from the kicker's point of view, it is quite impartial towards us, no favorites and no black sheeps, we are but humble stones in his/her eyes. Also no matter what kind of kick and how hard we are hit, we always achieve our composure, and we are kicked again. Mind you 'kick' here is not always a bad thing.
Thank you all for leaving comments here.
-J |
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Re: Kicking The Stone
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 05:48:57 PM AEST
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Good analogy, remote...can be viewed other ways as well..
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