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She Was The Sun
Contributed by
Devotchkas
on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 05:23:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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I can be your gift of illusion.
And I can be your fatal intrusion.
I could be your running start.
Then turn around and break your heart.
I could be your sea of sand.
And I could be your last demand.
I could be different.
I could be the one.
I could speak the softest words
Then point out the lies and curve.
I could be your sweetest dream.
then turn around and become a hated scheme.
I could be your secret desire.
In other words, I could let our love expire.
I can be your closest friend.
Then turn around and wake the end.
I am whatever you make me.
I could be different.
I should be different ..
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Devotchkas
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2005-09-16 05:23:06] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: She Was The Sun
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rxqueen on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 10:43:43 AM AEST (User
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Nice job... sounds like my husband... I really liked this, it was easy to read yet it had depth. I really liked : "I can be your gift of illusion.
And I can be your fatal intrusion.
" Good work keep it up. XOXOOX |
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Re: She Was The Sun
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 01:15:10 PM AEST (User
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this is simple yet to the point.. good job i enjoyed this write..
JENNI |
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Re: She Was The Sun
(User Rating: 1 ) by LilyFire on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 09:22:04 PM AEST (User
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Sounds almost sad...like your pointing out all the things that could have been but somehow went wrong...Nice write though.... |
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Re: She Was The Sun
(User Rating: 1 ) by SkC_cutie on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 12:55:36 PM AEST (User
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I love the poem and the way that you write |
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