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Ravelin Moon.
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 10:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You and me in ancient memories...
Chasing mother nature's butterflies,
Sit beside me by the flowing streams,
See our desire and water rising dreams,
Climbing rocks like children,
Smiling barefoot in the grass.....
Without the breeze; without the tides,
An aromatic sweetness blowing across my life...
Where would I be were you not at my side,
You make me whole from night past noon,
Without you I'd be only a Ravelin Moon.
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2003-01-17 10:00:00]
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Re: Ravelin Moon.
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by aernby on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 10:39:30 AM AEST
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my lady fawn,
a winson and wistful right,
beautiful and evocative
of a deep and abiding love
well done,
your friend
aern+ |
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Re: Ravelin Moon.
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by SusieQ on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 02:00:03 PM AEST
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| A lovely, loving, expression. I especially liked 'smiling barefoot in the grass'. I wish you many poetic inspirations. SusieQ |
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Re: Ravelin Moon.
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by Jessica_Saini on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 06:13:54 PM AEST
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I like the very first line. "ancient memories" sounds so mystical. I really enjoyed this beautiful poem:-)
~Jessica |
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Re: Ravelin Moon.
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 03:40:59 AM AEST
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Wow, this was so calm and peaceful. You put a lot of stuff into a few short lines. I had visions of being at a beach... so very peaceful. Whats a Ravelin Moon?
Your friend,
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Re: Ravelin Moon.
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by wolfflow on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 12:03:09 PM AEST
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two lunatics colliding
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Re: Ravelin Moon.
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by cyrano on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 05:50:16 PM AEST
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| Great rythm and movement..Ravelin Moon...like that a lot! |
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Re: Ravelin Moon.
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by hray42 on
Sunday, 27th April 2014 @ 06:18:22 PM AEST
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| A very quaint flow to this one.. Lonely in feeling and in thought.. A good one..... |
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