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Learned to love the lie.
Contributed by
Lollypopxcore
on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 02:20:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I want to believe that im alright
But i sat thought about him all night
and it's there.
that feeling of being empty
that smile he took away from me
because he lied.
I feel like no one can ever love me for real
all of my relationships are fake
I give all of my heart to them
and they always let it break
I cant tell you this in words
how i feel when im alone
I smile like nothings wrong
I dont like my feelings shown.
...love at first sight...
I use to talk to him all night
And when i did
i felt alright
the pain was gone.
I thought i could stay stong
but im weak..
and now im bleeding.
Copyright ©
Lollypopxcore
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2005-09-16 02:20:56]
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Re: Learned to love the lie.
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by Twysted_Fate on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 04:18:26 AM AEST
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| Wow, Lolly, that was heartwrenching, seriously tugging at the heart strings... I look forward to reading more of your stuff... |
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Re: Learned to love the lie.
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 07:23:50 PM AEST
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A sad, emotional and heart felt write. I'm so sorry for the pain and suffering u r feeling.
I hope that u find a loving person who will treat u with the love and respect that u deserve real soon.
Heart felt hugs 4 u,
Sue, Dreamer |
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Re: Learned to love the lie.
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 03:38:22 AM AEST
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| Painful write that is obviously stemmed from true heartache. Nice work. |
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