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just frame me next time
Contributed by
burdened
on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 01:12:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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so, allow me to give my personal state,
a tad more eloquence:
a basin,
cracked straight through--
but it's been in the family for years,
and you call it your favorite;
but you broke it.
on purpose.
to keep it for yourself.
oh, because it's beautiful on the inside--
coarse and brittle,
textured and stained.
so beautiful, darling.
i had to open you.
you're too precious for such secrets.
but not too much for concrete exposure.
Copyright ©
burdened
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2005-09-16 01:12:26]
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Re: just frame me next time
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by Twysted_Fate on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 02:00:05 AM AEST
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| Damn Burdened, thats just creepy... sweet, creepy and dark as heck... nicely done |
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Re: just frame me next time
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by coolbreeze17 on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 03:12:01 PM AEST
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| lOve it!!!!!! |
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