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The Walking Dead
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 06:55:21 PM in AEST
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I am the living, walking dead,
Do I exist or is it in my head,
Alone I walk in the dying street,
Wondering if the devil & I will ever meet?
I died a long time ago,
Nobody thought of me or cried in sorrow,
I was a ghost way before my soul passed,
Now over the world my shadows cast.
Disease still courses through my veins,
Lucifer won’t release the hold on my reigns,
I suffer in his sick world,
Wearing round my neck his dark pearl.
The pearl of the dead & demised souls,
My ravaged body fades in this dark hole,
Sanity for me is a dream far away,
I am the devils lover, also his prey.
I will forever pay for my sins,
I cry alone as the light in my mind falls dim,
I am the living & walking dead,
Was I ever alive or was it all in his head?
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pixie
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Re: The Walking Dead
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by DesolantDreamer on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 07:39:05 PM AEST
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wow. You could sent that to an artist and it would make a great song! It is full of dark angst and raw emotion. Awsome job! Keep up the good work!
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Re: The Walking Dead
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by waos on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 08:01:35 PM AEST
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Hey,
I think this could be developed into a really good piece of writing.
I'd say the 4th stanza was the strongest. Keep working hard!
~Kara~~Waos~ |
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Re: The Walking Dead
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 09:00:52 PM AEST
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This poem's gotta be by far one of my favorites by u pix, my god it floored me,
" I am the devils lover, also his prey" yeh
and on hell of a poet, this may be dark,
but it also feels very real, perfect pix.
(((((pix))))))
Ben |
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Re: The Walking Dead
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 09:44:54 PM AEST
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Awww pixie girl.
I can feel your pain this write.
I hope you feel better soon.
love and hugs |
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Re: The Walking Dead
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by brew on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 09:58:17 PM AEST
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Deep and dark, with pain..........maybe it will change, Emotional, and struggling to find.......hope you do find
Brew~
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Re: The Walking Dead
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by Rxqueen on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 11:17:11 AM AEST
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| Nice and dark, i liked this one. Morbid. XOXO |
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Re: The Walking Dead
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 06:43:46 AM AEST
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Krissie, this was just dark and evil LOL.
I like this write, there's a chilling depth behind it. Nicely done sweetie.
Jane~ |
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Re: The Walking Dead
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 12:09:55 AM AEST
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I didn't like the first stanza, but after the line,
"I died a long time ago," it was awesome. It
was nice to read something you had written
again. I really like the rhyming as well. Great
write *thumbs up*
Bobo (Joel)
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Re: The Walking Dead
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by pander on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 03:53:12 PM AEST
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Hi Pix!
Something just told me to check in here tonight and I'm so glad I did.
If ever a piece of writing was created to draw the reader in and capture them, this is it! In some ways sad, in some ways chilling. This is an awesome piece of work and I'm praying to god it comes from that wonderful imagination of yours and not from real life. But having said that, you know that I will always be here for you, no matter what.
Take care dear Pixie.
Love always,
Pander
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Re: The Walking Dead
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by Jen54 on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 01:29:46 PM AEST
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| wow that was really good I liked it a lot. |
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Re: The Walking Dead
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 09:23:13 AM AEST
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Excellent. This was really really good.. I liked it alot . it read smoothly and it was well written.
christina |
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Re: The Walking Dead
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by Live2Die on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 08:12:12 PM AEST
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Woah, really...deep, and very good. I really like it, =). Your poetry is amazing.
~ Riisa |
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Re: The Walking Dead
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by secretwind on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 07:17:44 PM AEST
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| your InnerVisons thrill me and chill me....here In the shadows....I drift on your flows. |
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