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I still love you
Contributed by
jambo
on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 04:54:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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sorry for that one cold night, my feelings trickled from my blue broken heart, ur love leaving my life , forever.
I knew u so well, we were the best. ultimate mates. now we are, but 2 people. like water on a leaf, i lose ur love gradual.
For too long my heart has fallen for u, the time to break has passed and my heart cried its tears of agony for the long cold night.
Now my heart is no more, none but few pools of love for u remain and now i stand on my own, without ur love. I'm lost!
But as my painful, loveless heart calms , love for you still gets found. regret in my soul orders the heart not to keep this strange, returing love
but my heart refuses. i know u dont feel the same, ur love is with another . i cant live with my hearts uncontollable actions, my soul's
unheard orders. The melody my heart still plays always reminds me of the heavens gift of ur love. But that is gone. no need for my love
for u should stay in my heart, as ur free , open heart lends its love to another. please dont hurt my soul much longer, tell me the truth. that ur
sweet, healthy love is not for me, tell me u dont have love, nor affection for me,
please?
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jambo
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2005-09-15 16:54:42]
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Re: I still love you
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by DesolantDreamer on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 07:42:30 PM AEST
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| Wow. Beautiful...not much to say really. Wonderfuly expressed. |
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Re: I still love you
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by Sahara on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 08:12:39 PM AEST
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Great write albeit sad, but still moving. I think the majority has felt this way at one time or another. Great job expressing it.
Sonya |
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Re: I still love you
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by visualizing_life on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 11:47:01 PM AEST
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| very beautifully powerful write, i feel your pain and emotions...keep writin and keep your head up high |
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