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It's The Little Things
Contributed by
Willofree
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Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 04:04:30 PM in AEST
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It's a warm smile from a stranger
The lingering squeeze of one's hand
A warm caring hug and embrace
It's a loving whispered enduring phrase
The stir of a cool summer breeze
The blooming flower in the spring
The beauty of the fall leaf
The wonder of a fresh fallen snow
The relinquishing of one stage
For the arrival of another new season
Taken separately each a simmering moment
But collectively a monumental event
To herald in one change of venue for another
Each with its' unique origin and design
One of human connection and the divine
The other of Mother Nature so sublime
To show love and appreciation
Ones' greatest personal reward
What more can we ask for
Then to be revered by our Lord
Copyright ©
Willofree
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Re: It's The Little Things
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 04:11:48 PM AEST
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Oh Will..this is so beautiful.... we have so much to be thankful for in this life that we should never ask for more.
We should learn to appreciate the 'little things in life'.
Thank you for sharing this...
Hugs
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Re: It's The Little Things
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 04:16:42 PM AEST
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mmm very nice. Some of those things I had in mind when writing my latest too. I enjoyed the way you separated into stanzas the wonder of humanity and the wonder of nature, yet included both. Lovely work!
Blessings, J. |
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Re: It's The Little Things
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 04:21:31 PM AEST
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Will! I love this.
It really is the little things that are important. They mean the most, to me.
This is gorgeous.
And it really made me smile.
Great write.
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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Re: It's The Little Things
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 05:36:42 PM AEST
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A beautifully portrayed piece of poetry. Outstanding and remarkable. A wonderful reminder about the joy the little things in life can bring us. Well done,
Hugs,
Sue, Dreamer |
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Re: It's The Little Things
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 06:02:41 PM AEST
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I have found in life these stanzas to be quite true. If you can find the beauty of simplicity in anything, human or nature, then you have found the truest most important part. This is truly a lovely read. Thank you for sharing it.
Rita |
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Re: It's The Little Things
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 06:08:05 PM AEST
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Claps with vigor!!!!!!!
An excellent piece to remind us of those "little" things that make life just so important!!!! |
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Re: It's The Little Things
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by Nazmythian on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 03:47:46 AM AEST
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Terry, don't ... what ever you do ... don't ever consider yourself to be one of those "Little Things". You shine brightly here. Another well concieved write.
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: It's The Little Things
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by Archie on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 11:48:21 AM AEST
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I think this song deserves a song quote
"A gentle touch
can mean so much
a smile a letter sent away
a little smile
can be so worth while
to show affection each day"
From "The little things you do" by Sam Cooke
Your poem reminds me greatly of this song and its meaning. You have written a very inspirational poem. |
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Re: It's The Little Things
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 12:31:49 PM AEST
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Great job with this one Will...It had some lovely visuals swirling around in my head as I read this. It's the little things that make the most impact.
Very well done!
Scorp. |
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Re: It's The Little Things
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 05:09:20 PM AEST
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Beautiful, just beautiful Willofree, loved every moment of this write. Wonderful words, a song for Jesus
*****To show love and appreciation
Ones' greatest personal reward
What more can we ask for
Then to be revered by our Lord
Amen
Raquel Leah :D |
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