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Geometry Of Mind
Contributed by
WAE
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Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 03:36:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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First there is dot and it is the start.
At lenght the dot transforms into a line.
The line bends itself becoming a circle.
The circle breaks dimensions growing into a sphere.
the sphere is perfect.
But still there is an infinity of space oustide its limits,
In which a human mind gets lost.
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WAE
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Re: Geometry Of Mind
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by remote on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 03:48:07 PM AEST
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| Great write, one of your better works. |
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Re: Geometry Of Mind
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by lostrelic on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 07:12:15 PM AEST
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| short but geometricaly straight forward great write |
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Re: Geometry Of Mind
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by LeahBeth on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 05:29:18 PM AEST
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| You are a very good writer...keep up the good work. |
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Re: Geometry Of Mind
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 09:54:21 PM AEST
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| This is good. If you think about your words as ideas and thoughts this poem actually hits upon concepts of human nature. I like thispoem for it's vastness trapped inside simplicity. |
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Re: Geometry Of Mind
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by SunflowersAndTea on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 06:21:14 PM AEST
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| i agree with archie, it does say a lot about human nature, and it is very poetic in a simplistic metaphorical way.....i have often compared geometry to life myself.... |
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