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obscured heart
Contributed by
just-b
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Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 11:42:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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apprehensive and being totally belligerent to face what we call fear to ones
own natural ability to see into what we most need to see with in ourself.
It is not what we want to see but what we need to see, Can you put enough emphasize
on finding that special gift we take for granted each moment of every breath that we take.
Blind sided ,one sided, it doesn't matter who takes time to really smell the roses assume the positive
responablity to nurture our intenable desires of self meaning. We have this treasure within just finding the inner strenght to use and to share would be an amazing fourthcoming. Close your eyes breath in it is there this feeling of self proclaimed love share it embrace it is all we have .
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Re: obscured heart
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by Archie on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 12:13:38 PM AEST
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| That is a good thought. I think about those things. |
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Re: obscured heart
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by allowanceofthoughts on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 12:33:42 PM AEST
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| I like that words: we take for granted each moment of every breath. That is so true. Maybe if all of stopped and read something like this, we might realize that some things are taken for granted everyday and life would be much more blessed if we never took anything for granted at all. Nicely Done! |
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Re: obscured heart
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by WAE on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 02:35:41 PM AEST
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Nice writing! I was a bit confused with the first line but if it is a narration of your thought's flow than it's fine and I, as a reader, should accept your way and try to make it accessible to my own mode of thinking. Once again, I liked it.
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