|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Would You?!?
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 08:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
|
Would you love me absolutely if I could no longer walk;
or if my voice muttered; or would never again talk?
Would you love me if my surrendering arms didn't bend;
Would you know from my quiet heart the love that I send?
Would you love me if I'd never again, life, see?
What if you'd have to be my visional eyes for me?
And if my leg was made of only wood;
would you be disgusted, or do what you could?
Would you let me have, and help care for my dog?
Take us both for walks; sit with us upon a log?
And if I was unable to feed myself, then
I drooled on you, could you laugh and call me elf?
Would you love me if we lived in the jungles, and
my cooking skills were forgotten or suddenly in jumbles?
And on the day, when the world turns away,
will you be there to say,"Love you", least once a day?
If the forces that be were to decide that I grow old..
might you be the one there that I'd want to hold?
And if my ears were to never again to hear your sweet voice;
would you stay with me? Or make another choice?
Could we talk far and longgg into the black of night, by
sitting silently, touching loving fingers telepathically tight?
See... I love you Unconditionally,
And am ever grateful that your loving me:)
Copyright ©
ladyfawn
... [
2003-01-17 08:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Would You?!?
(User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 08:29:38 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| wonderful write, a lovely sight of unconditional love, thanks for sharing this great write |
|
|
Re: Would You?!?
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 08:58:03 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| beautiful |
|
|
Re: Would You?!?
(User Rating: 1 )
by Mystery_Girl on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 09:09:42 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Unconditional love today ...is a rare find....a lovely write.............Tanya...... |
|
|
Re: Would You?!?
(User Rating: 1 )
by roisin on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 03:36:29 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
had it once...maybe luck will be with me again...another good write
ta
rosie |
|
|
Re: Would You?!?
(User Rating: 1 )
by nomad on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 10:27:24 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Interesting questions, Nessa. Hopefully never having to be asked. Excellent write. Your devotion to your Love is glorious. |
|
|
Re: Would You?!?
(User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 11:57:00 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| if i could write as you do and express myself so well as you, i could answer that properly but babe if i ever let you down i let this whole life down |
|
|
Re: Would You?!?
(User Rating: 1 )
by princesspurty on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 07:23:10 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| this is what love is all about, for those lucky enough to have it are indeed the envy of all, beautiful write |
|
|
Re: Would You?!?
(User Rating: 1 )
by colinb on
Wednesday, 16th April 2014 @ 01:50:07 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| the perfect description of love |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
