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Lines In The Sand
Contributed by
Twysted_Fate
on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 01:34:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Now I've seen the lines in the sand,
Where in your wretched heart, the place that I stand.
To everyone else,
you claim you're above me,
yet when we're alone,
you tell me you love me.
Again I've seen the lines in the sand,
my pain you've caused,
you could never comprehend.
It was you who had lied,
you did it more everyday,
with more and more men,
did your cheap affections stray..
I can't believe
just how I fell for you,
yet another stupid thing,
I would go and do.
I loved you, you played me,
its all the same,
ripped apart were my emotions,
in your sick twisted game.
The lines in the sand,
they've been drawn once more,
Me, now I'm a better person,
but you're still a cheap whore.
It annoys the hell out of me,
that I'm such a nice guy,
because why then would I wish,
you'd just shrivel up and die..
I know these are rotten things,
that no one should ever say,
theres the door girl,
get out, don't stay....
The pain that you've caused,
can never be undone,
now without you my hearts gotten lighter,
no longer weighing a ton..
What you've done to me,
now hopefully you do comprehend,
visible for everyone to see,
just like the lines in the sand!
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Twysted_Fate
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2005-09-15 01:34:24]
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Re: Lines In The Sand
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 05:28:07 AM AEST
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I think its quite typical of someone who hasn't written/read poetry in a long time. Reactionary and relevant only to the author and/or the intended audience.
Read more,
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Re: Lines In The Sand
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 05:48:42 AM AEST
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Aaron the fist time i saw this i really felt the emotions behind it. This was good keep it up.
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Re: Lines In The Sand
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by Flipped_out on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 02:10:46 PM AEST
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Awesome work Aaron The emotions behind this poem are clear and heartfelt and well done you feeling brave enough after your recent events to post
please ignore the comment from neptunes first, they obviously haven't been laid for a while..well sh i tty , there are a few uber pretentious people on this site but, the majority are indeed good people
NF shame on you
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Re: Lines In The Sand
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by oreo_kisses on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 07:45:26 PM AEST
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| THIS POEM ROCKZ keep up the great work! |
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