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Eternal Love
Contributed by
Tails
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Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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An undying urge to hold you in my arms
I'm so overwhelmed by your untouchable charm
So many ways I love you, so hard to describe
Everything you do sends a chill down my spine
For when I sleep, I dream of you all the time
Being awake is no different, you're always on my mind
You hold that particular place in my heart
It would take an eternity to tear this apart
You're all I've ever wanted, I couldn't ask for more
I'll give you all I have, my love, my respect, my support
I wonder if it's even possible to be this in love
It must have been a gift to me from above
I doubt these words can justify what you mean to me
But they are mearly an overview of what is meant to be
An unimaginable relationship destined for us two
These thoughts of love and happiness will last a lifetime through
This loving bond will grow stronger as the years go on their way
In my life, my heart, my soul is where you'll always remain
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Tails
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2003-01-17 08:00:00]
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Re: Eternal Love
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 08:32:26 AM AEST
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| absolutly wonderfully written, thanks for sharing this part of your heart |
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Re: Eternal Love
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 12:02:03 PM AEST
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| Beautiful... enjoyed it all the way, a very sweet write:) |
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Re: Eternal Love
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 01:05:16 PM AEST
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| I had someone say some of these very words to me not so long ago....these words must be swirling the whole world through..... a gorgeous write!!! |
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Re: Eternal Love
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by OreO on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 10:39:49 PM AEST
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Oh this is breathtaking...how beautiful is this...and i have felt this way before..True Love never leaves you..it will always stand by your side...this i have learned very well...but lately the one thing i have learned as well is that True Love is a Sacrifice...a dear friend had me in tears so bad after a comment made of his...and it touched me so deeply....but i love the way you have so many emotions and feelings laid out in this poem...it's full of reality and strength as well....love this one....welcome to YPDC my friend...i'll be looking forward to reading more of your poetry....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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