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Just A Dream
Contributed by
candysears
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Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 08:34:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I'm just a dream,a small
Cast of a shadow
Small soft inprints in the
Sand~
Like the fine mist of snow
Here today~
Gone Tomorrow~
Is there anyone who care?
Just a dream
Just a vision for now and ever
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candysears
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2005-09-14 20:34:26]
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Re: Just A Dream
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by hoist1atca on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 11:34:05 PM AEST
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I like your choice of words-
Sometimes a dream is all that we have to make it into tomorrow.
Sometimes a dream is more reality than imagination...
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Re: Just A Dream
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 02:09:15 PM AEST
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and this is just a master peice, best i've read
in awhile, it's perfect in every way, and most beautifully human, this is the firt poem i've read by you, it won't be the last, very lovely in
a most delicate way along with your style . . .
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