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THE STORM
Contributed by
psychokiller138
on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 08:06:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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The Storm
Look to the Sky . . . As it Turns Black . . .
My Life Is over I Can Never Look Back
The Rain Is My Tears Pouring down upon My Face . . .
I Feel like I Have Been a Disgrace
The Thunder Is My Cries of Pain!
The Lightning Is Me Remembering Your Face!
The Wind Is Me Trying to Runaway
From All of the Pain!
The Storm Is:
My Life!
Copyright ©
psychokiller138
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2005-09-14 20:06:23]
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Re: THE STORM
(User Rating: 1 )
by msbeeautch2u on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 01:11:56 AM AEST
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| I really like this piece. The flow kinda breaks in the middle, but I love how you were able to compare everything to real feelings. The words you used I can now feel them and see them as different than what they normally are used for. It's short , but packed with alot of emotion. Great Job!! |
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Re: THE STORM
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by lilmom101 on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 05:10:14 PM AEST
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i liked this i think is was a reallt good way to express yourself
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Re: THE STORM
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by Kimmie_mac on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 08:13:30 AM AEST
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| Hope you are out of the storm. I liked the way you expressed yourself. I do hope things are better for you. Your friend |
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