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the sun has risen (and it took the noose with it)
Contributed by
abnormalpunk
on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 05:18:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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infinity lost divinity
am i joking myself?
i hate it here...
stop
these voices wont shut up
they keep on talking
they keep on yelling
they keep on screeching their nails upon my chalkboard heart
amen for them those tiny people
i do not know what this is
a poem to a savior
or trying to create one
its not the latter
for i need not lie
walking down the streets
with streetlights overhead
i wake up in the morning
to find my body dead
it lays there oh so fragiley
with insicions running deep
it seemed like someone wanted
to forget me in their sleep
[or mine...]
the time to dream has come
close, eyes.
close.
leave this world with slumber in your head
and leave this mind with my body dead
control me
control this
control everything i never wanted anyways
cuz i dont care...
stop trying to make me you
you demon
you foul little item of filth
i rest here to refuel myself
transfuge my heart
for the bleeding
continued throughout the evening
twilight
such a simple word
is there a place that i can hide so everyone can see me?
cuz i want to be there
in the blackened spotlight...
pity is my apathy
my little remedy
the tiny thing that makes me feel like im happy
like im pittied
mockery is what i love to say
especially involving you...
hope to die
and hate to live
why did the chicken cross the road?
if all that was there
was a noose
goodnight goodnight
the sun has risen
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abnormalpunk
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2005-09-14 17:18:47]
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Re: the sun has risen (and it took the noose with it)
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 06:16:47 PM AEST
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| wow. I really enjoyed reading this. it's got a lot of emotion in it and that makes it powerful. awesome stuff. |
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Re: the sun has risen (and it took the noose with it)
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by anitajames on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 08:47:20 PM AEST
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I can sense the anger and despair in your words.
"is there a place that i can hide so everyone can see me"
I really relate to this verse. Good write. |
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