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BabyBoi
Contributed by
PixieLovezChrisSchwoerer
on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 04:36:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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BabyBoi, do u know how i feel?
I tell u alot,
but do u believe me?
I love u so much!!!!!
Kyle, u mean everything to me,
I am so glad that i am with u!!!
I never thought that we could be toghther,
I never knew how much i meant to u!!
Dont pay any attention,
to the snobby ***** Alyssa.
She's tryin to take u...but she cant
u live there and we live here..
I will never cheat on u,
i dont want to lose u to somthing stupid.
I love u,
and u love me.
We belong together.
and i'm glad we are...
i hope we last forever...
Kyle.......babyboi......
i love you with all my heart......
love alwayz,
Your BabyGurl.......
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2005-09-14 16:36:54] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: BabyBoi
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 04:59:52 PM AEST (User
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I really liked the emotion in this poem. But I really could not respect the part that says I hope we last forever, because sometimes we humans make mistakes in our lifes by saying that we will last forever, then that curses us when we say that because then after that we usually break up with eachother, then we are haunted by the rest of our life just because we said we will last forever. No dispresect Pixie. I'm just explaining how I feel and how life can work. SLipSiX. *Rose* |
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