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The day I saw love walk out the door
Contributed by
JenJen
on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 01:07:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I saw love walk out the door
Another day of heart ache for me
I could never imagine it to have been this hard
To give up and leave
The feeling that I had for you
Where very different from the others
The laughter, smiles and tears I felt
And I thought we were lovers
The tears I’ve wept for you
The laughter that we shared
Whipped away like a crumb on a desk
You will never know how much I really cared
Copyright ©
JenJen
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2005-09-14 13:07:39]
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Re: The day I saw love walk out the door
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 04:31:24 PM AEST
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| A very interesting poem, maybe you should get it out? Lol. SLipSiX. Good write. |
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Re: The day I saw love walk out the door
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 05:44:53 AM AEST
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Bland.
So - you gave up and left, but love walked out the door? I'm confused . . . but not perplexed - this poem troubles my imagination not.
Outta here. |
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Re: The day I saw love walk out the door
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by loura on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 03:05:04 PM AEST
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i like it...a lot..
good luck for everything |
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