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Moonlight Escape
Contributed by
anitajames
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Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 11:23:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Moonlight sweeps away the signs of the day.
Dulling the ugliness that is stirring to play.
It beckons to me and brings me a peace
That can never be bartered like some pretty beast.
It brings me your touch and loves sweet release.
In the day, all is open and shining so bright.
The moon, helps to hide the scars with the night.
I long to walk through the mist and gaze high
loftily searching for the soft in the sky.
I long to be comforted
I long not to cry.
Copyright ©
anitajames
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2005-09-14 11:23:58]
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Re: Moonlight Escape
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 12:41:15 PM AEST
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good write from a good writer
i hope things get better ,,, |
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Re: Moonlight Escape
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by ThornMEngla on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 09:00:27 PM AEST
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This is a truely touching poem. I esp. liked the last 2 lines! Good Job!
Diana |
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Re: Moonlight Escape
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 07:36:05 AM AEST
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I'll echo Diana. I believe the last two lines are the most powerful, from a very powerful poem. Really good poem.
Take care.
David |
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Re: Moonlight Escape
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 06:22:13 PM AEST
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I am a moonchild, my source of strength I find in that moon at night.. I recall my day, I pray.. and also, I use my view of the moon for much of my thinking in my writing.. it is powerful..
I loved this write..
Raquel Leah :D |
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