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let it rain
Contributed by
xXxmegsxXx
on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 09:03:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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oh God, oh God
please let it rain
make the water droplets
wash away my pain
i can't bare it much longer
it's tearing me apart
there's so little love
it's breaking my heart
let the water cleanse me
set me free
make me feel whole,
loved and happy
oh God, oh God
please let it rain
make the water droplets
wash away my pain
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2005-09-14 09:03:32]
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Re: let it rain
(User Rating: 1 )
by kcampbell on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 07:57:01 AM AEST
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| I love this poem, it it a lot like one I wrote that I haven't been able to post yet- good job! |
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Re: let it rain
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by lilmom101 on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 05:25:28 PM AEST
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| i really like this nice rythem and rhyme |
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