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The Inquest
Contributed by
remote
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Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 08:35:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Thrusting a dagger
deep into my heart
just to see if I bleed.
Warmth of the scarlet
spreading on my chest
no doubt, tells me,
"Yes indeed, you do bleed".
Pronouncing, no doubt,
success
of this inquest.
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remote
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2005-09-14 08:35:34]
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Re: The Inquest
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by brew on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 09:03:55 AM AEST
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Such deep and anguished words. Hm.......Like taken a worn heart, and making it stretch even more..........yes, we see how much we can bleed, and it happen in many ways. Good write.!
Brew~ |
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Re: The Inquest
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by venkat on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 01:04:40 AM AEST
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| So..a truth is proved by inquest :-)venkat |
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Re: The Inquest
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by remote on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 07:03:40 AM AEST
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Yes, the truth is revealed by the inquest.
This was a satire indicating the stupid length humanity goes to find simple(or obvious) answers, in the process they destroy what is precious. May it be relation, or a scientific persuit, story is always the same.
-J |
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Re: The Inquest
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 01:26:27 PM AEST
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A most procative poem says much with few words then don't they always? very strong
writte.
Ben |
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Re: The Inquest
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by WAE on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 04:41:11 PM AEST
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I do understand what you are trying to say but this is not the best one of yours.
Good luck,
Alex (I keep watching ...LOL) |
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Re: The Inquest
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by Ruby2sdy on
Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 03:44:33 PM AEST
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Hmm, good satire! I like it, and it's so very often proved true... it's like doing a test to see if water makes us pee... hang on, hasn't someone done that? haha,
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